Action Tips: Write a Letter To an Elected Official

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You've probably heard a bazillion times from teachers, websites, and anyone who hears you complain about something in your community: "Why don't you write a letter?" So now we are saying it too: WRITE A LETTER! Officials will listen, especially if they are local leaders.

Find The Right Person

Figure out who should get your letter.

Who you choose is up to you but local officials are usually best. Click your way to your town's website to find the names and addresses of town and school officials.

  • GlobalComputing.com is a great source for finding your state’s official website.
  • Canadians can try this site: Pal.gc.ca.
  • Senate.gov provides a list of all senators along with their D.C. addresses.
  • House.gov will give your representatives contact information.
If you choose to write something about your school you should also send a copy to your School Board President (your school secretary has this information).

Paper or E-Mail?

Based on the contact information you find, you'll need to decide whether to e-mail the official or send them a letter through the mail. Either way, your letter should use the format below.

Pen Points:

  • A short direct letter is powerful. Officials don't have a lot of time, if it's longer, they may not get the message.
  • If you decide to handwrite your letter, make sure your writing is neat and legible. If other people can’t read your writing, then they won’t read your letter.
  • Be polite; don’t be too aggressive.
  • Include your name, address, and ways to contact you (phone number, email) on the letter AND the envelope.
  • Be really specific with your concerns and requests. Elected officials deal with a lot of problems every day, but if they see that you have a particular problem or issue in mind, then it'll be easier for them to take action to resolve it. If you’re writing about a specific bill, give them the bill number (and definitely tell them how you want them to vote!).
  • Keep in mind that facts carry a lot more weight than reasons such as "because it’s bad" or "because I like it."
  • Address them in a respectable way!
If writing to members of the U.S. House of Representatives: Date
The Honorable (full name) United States House of Representatives (get street address here https://forms.house.gov/wyr/welcome.shtml) Washington, DC 20515
Dear Representative (last name):
If writing to members of the U.S. Senate: Date
The Honorable (full name) United States Senate address (get street address here http://www.senate.gov/general/contact_information/senators_cfm.cfm) Washington, DC 20510
Dear Senator (last name):

Make it yours!

Follow the basic structure rules of a formal letter, but make the letter yours. The more genuinely and passionately you write, the more effective your message will be.

SAMPLE LETTER

The Honorable Sherrod Brown
455 Russell Senate Office Building
Washington, DC 20510
RE: Safe Space for Youth

Dear Senator Brown,

I am a resident of Springdom, OH, and I am writing because there is a terrible lack of safe places for youth in my community.

Springdom’s mayor and council are proposing a town-wide ordinance requiring that people under the age of 18 must be accompanied by an adult while shopping at the Springdom Mega-Mall. They borrowed the idea from other communities that have passed similar rules in response to incidents such as kids getting into minor fights on mall property. Mayor Jackson believes that by requiring youth to be accompanied by chaperones, she will eliminate this problem. Some of the strongest arguments against the idea are that it will dramatically reduce business and it may actually increase danger - if kids can’t go to the mall, they’ll find other, not so well-guarded places to hang out.

As a young, concerned citizen of Springdom, I agree that youth violence at the mall is a big problem for both kids and adults, but I think the best way to address this matter is by attacking it at its root. To be perfectly honest, there is nothing to do in Springdom after school lets out. That’s why kids go to the mall! The youth of Springdom need a cool, safe space where they can go after school to hang. I’ve spoken with several friends and teachers and we all agree that Springdom would benefit greatly from the addition of a community space offering athletics, art and other activities so that kids can socialize in a constructive manner.

Specifically, I am writing to ask you to promote the maintenance of community spaces and the creation of more parks and nature trails. Springdom, for one, has thick woodlands. If you worked with the Ohio Parks Department to create running and biking trails in communities such as Springdom, everyone, not only the youth, would benefit greatly. I know that I for one, speaking as a youth and concerned citizen, would gain considerably from this program.

Thank you for considering this matter.
Sincerely,

(your handwritten signature)

Betsey Lopez
CC: Soandso, Jr. , Springdom School Board President